Good Job Rachel! I really like your use of the eraser tool, the crop is quite clean, and blends smoothly into the background. I also like how you showed yourself as opposed to Pele, it explains the allusion. (Sort of)... But I do agree with Maurice. Other than that good job.

Final Poem

call Me by

schrute

call Me by

dynamite

the person is the same

but different is the name

vast knowledge I bear but not of beets

instead you’ll find many other feats

summer thinks Im cool-ish (sometimes)… though,

I’m out of the norm “vote for pedro”

I’m fun; know Me, you’ll see in a lick

unless we’re riding bikes into brick

a monster baby is very tall

this trait I have except I don’t crawl

I’ve had curly hair now for a while

*grin*

not on my head but down on my shin

see I’m unique I’ve crafted these rhymes

though they were  desperate, nickels and dimes

I’ve spoke through my voice it’s who I am

now you know Me

Poem Graphic

ME

you’re drinking 1%...I notice.
I may be a bit socially awkward,

But I’m not telling you to vote for Pedro,

I’m just saying Summer might want to play tetherball with me

I am not that of a celery farmer,

Still with roots

perhaps a beet,

like Schrute I am creative,

From blue energy I run-

off

I'm tall, but I wasn't a monster baby,
and I didn't grow up with my grandma,
Iv'e absorbed my surroundings,
(luckily there weren't any onion patches)
I am a product of my environment